In class we are asked to put these comments in order of the least helpful to the most helpful.
I Think number 1
is the worst because there is no full stops or capital letters and they did not put a return for the next paragraph
she did not put a first capital letter for her name she also put she wrote how to make a lot she
wrote a lot of words wrong like a lot i rate it like 1/10
because it is bad.
I think that number 2 is the best because it has a lot of effort because it has a capital letter for their name because they think it is polite and they did a return for a second paragraph so then they put there full stops at the end of a sentence that is amazing because it has a question mark on a end of a sentence because they want it to be a question.